Question

假設下面是你的一位美國筆友所在學校的基本情況，請把表格中的信息用完整的句子表達出來，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文向你的同學們介紹美國中學生的校園生活。

Time	9:00 am—4:00 pm
Midday	Have lunch at school; Chat and listen to pop music
After-school activities	Have a lot of time to do
Class	Twenty-five students in each class; Don’t have to wear uniforms
School	A library, a big football field and a swimming pool.
Homework	Half an hour of homework

 

Answer 1

One possible version:
My American friend’s school starts at 9:00 a.m. and finished at 4:00 p.m. They have lunch at school. After lunch, they chat with each other. Sometimes they listen to pop music. They have a lot of time to do after-school activities. There are twenty-five students in each class. They don’t have to wear uniforms. There is a library in their school. They often go there to read or borrow books. They also have a big football field and a swimming pool. They don’t have much homework. They only have to spend half an hour on homework every day.

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