Question

書面表達（共1小題，計15分）

健康的生活方式對我們的影響到底有多大？看看Henry的變化，你就知道答案了。請根據表格內容的提示，以“A healthy lifestyle is important” 為題，寫一篇不少于70詞的短文來描述Henry的變化。(在作文中要體現形容詞的比較級，至少一句話)

Time	Two years ago	Now
Habit	Have much meat and cola	Like vegetables and fruit
Health	Hardly ever exercise; often feel tired	Run every morning; feel well
Study	Weak in all the subjects	Make great progress(進步) in every subject

A healthy lifestyle is important

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

A healthy lifestyle is important to everyone. Henry used to have much meat and cola two years ago and he hardly did exercise. So he often felt tired. What’s worse, he was weak in all the subjects because he wasn’t healthy enough to study well. However, he lives a healthier life now. He likes eating more vegetables and fruit. He runs every morning and he feels better. He even make great progress in every subject. In a word, a healthy lifestyle has made Henry stronger and better.

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達應根據表格信息寫一篇短文，介紹Henry兩年前和現在的改變，說明健康的生活方式的重要性。寫作應注意文章結構和層次，應注意時態的正確運用。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，先介紹了過去，再介紹現在。開頭和結尾點明了文章的主旨。本文準確運用時態。文章銜接連貫，運用了what’s worse, however, because, in a word等連詞進行銜接。同時，本文中運用了大量的形容詞比較級，為文章增色不少。如: healthier, more, better, stronger等。

考點：圖表作文。