Question

目前，我國實施城市化進程中，從鄉村（鎮）遷入城市的大多數孩子存在諸多的問題，假如你是Know，你的朋友Tony發電子郵件請教你關于如何交朋友的問題，請你給他回復一封電子郵件提幾點建議，詞數約90左右。
內容要點如下：1．在小區內玩耍時，你可以主動與他們交流成為新朋友，并告知家長；2．請求父母帶你去圖書館或一些公共場所，既可認識更多伙伴又可參加文體活動；3．在星期天，可外出郊游等。4、…….(發揮1-2點）總之，多參加交流活動，克服困難，保持耐心。
要求：1．涵蓋所有要點，意思連貫，符合邏輯。2．卷面整潔，可不得逐字翻譯。

Answer 1

Dear Tony
There are lots of things you can do. First ,you can ride your bike in your neighborhood and try to find some kids. When you find some , you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some public places where there are lots of kids. You could try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays.You can try making friends at lunches too if you go to churches on Sunday. In conclusion, try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself .
It takes time and patience. I hope you will find a best friend soon.
Yours
Know.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求在交朋友方面給出建議。提示要點比較詳細，寫作時注意文章的邏輯性就可以了。
【亮點說明】這篇短文涵蓋所有要點，意思連貫，符合邏輯，并應用了不少的復合句，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如some public places where there are lots of kids. try to be active wherever you are等。使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。