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13．為了使同學們之間相處得更加融洽，并且能夠更好地適應社會，你校學生會正在舉辦以"how to behave well"為主題的英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇英語短文談談你的看法．
要點：1）守時、有禮貌、誠實、公正；
2）友好待人，樂于助人；
3）…
要求：1）用上所給要點，并適當補充．
2）文中不得出現真實的人名、校名、地址等相關信息．
3）80個單詞左右．
How to behave well
What should we teenagers do to get on well with everything and everyone else？Here is what we should do and shouldn't be allowed to do．
As a good student，we must be on time and honest．And we should be polite and fair to everyone．Also，we should be kind and friendly to others．We should be ready to help people in trouble．Then we can get the same help from others．Besides these，we should obey traffic rules to keep safe．But we shouldn't make noise in public．We shouldn't drop litter everywhere，either．
It is not easy to behave well in daily life．However，everything will be OK if we try our best．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是以"how to behave well"為題談談對同學之間的日常行為舉止的看法．時態主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1）守時、有禮貌、誠實、公正；
2）友好待人，樂于助人；
3）其他
常用到的重點短語：
on time 準時 守時
be kind to sb 對某人友好
be ready to do sth 準備做某事
obey rules 遵守規則
make noise 制造噪音
【高分句型】
1．We should①be ready to help people ②in trouble．
①be ready to do sth 準備做某事
②介詞短語做后置定語，修飾前面的people．
2．①However，everything will be OK ②if we③try our best．
①however表轉折，然而．
②if引導的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現的規則．
③try one's best 竭盡全力

解答 How to behave well
What should we teenagers do to get on well with everything and everyone else？Here is what we should do and shouldn't be allowed to do．
As a good student，we must be on time and honest．And we should be polite and fair to everyone．（守時、有禮貌、誠實、公正）Also，we should be kind and friendly to others．We should be ready to help people in trouble．【高分句型】Then we can get the same help from others．（友好待人，樂于助人）Besides these，we should obey traffic rules to keep safe．But we shouldn't make noise in public．We shouldn't drop litter everywhere，either．（遵守交通規則，不要制造噪音、隨地扔垃圾）
It is not easy to behave well in daily life．However，everything will be OK if we try our best．【高分句型】

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發揮．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現在時態進行敘述．語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系．