Question

14．美國女孩Helen，最近在她的Blog上發布她的煩惱．請你（Yu Le）根據她的帖子，將她的煩惱和問題總結歸類，與她交流看法，并給她一些建議，幫她排憂解難．文章開頭已給出，不計入總次數．
要求：1．語句通順，語法正確，內容完善． 2．字數不少于80．
My problem is my parents．They never stop going on about how I should study hard，keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes．They even make me do the washing-up after dinner every night!None of my friends have got such parents．
I can't get on well with them．I am stressed out．What should I do？
Helen，USA

Dear Helen，
I know you feelingstressedout．But I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents．You should understand and respect them．They have richer experience and better advice for young people．As your parents，they surely hope you become an excellent person．Their demands are helpful for your growing up．
Every member should be responsible and do something for the family．So you should do what you can do，such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up．Remember：Learning by doing．
You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes．Teenagers should look like teenagers．
Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．
Yours，
YuLe．
Yours，
Yu Le．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 But I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents．但是我認為你有這樣好的父母是幸運的．  這是一個賓語從句，I think是主句，后面的是賓語從句，it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型，對于…來說…是幸運的．
 高分句型二
  Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．無論如何，如果你有任何問題，只要和你的父母談談．這是if引導的條件狀語從句，如果…．

解答 Dear Helen，
   I know you feeling stressed out【開頭點明主題】．But I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents．【高分句型一，注意賓語從句的使用】You should understand and respect them．They have richer experience and better advice for young people．As your parents，they surely hope you become an excellent person．Their demands are helpful for your growing up．
     Every member should be responsible and do something for the family．So you should do what you can do，such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up．Remember：Learning by doing．
     You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes．Teenagers should look like teenagers．【正文部分詳細介紹自己的建議】
     Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．【高分句型二，注意if引導的條件狀語從句的使用】【結尾緊扣主題】
Yours，
Yu Le．

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