Question

書面表達。（共10分）

請以My Pen Pal為題寫一篇50詞左右的短文�？梢詮南旅鎺讉�方面來寫：

1. What’s his/her name?

2. Where is he/she from?

3. How old is he/she?

4. What does he/she look like?

5. Does he/she like English?

My Pen Pal

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Answer 1

Kate is my pen pal. She comes from America. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin with a pair of glasses. She has a round face and short curly hair. She is good at all the subjects at school. She likes English very much and she can speak English well. We often chat in English so that we can improve our English. She is so lovely and friendly that I love her very much.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以My Pen Pal為題寫一篇短文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括：一、What’s his/her name?二、Where is he/she from?三、How old is he/she?四、What does he/she look like?五、Does he/she like English? 寫作提綱雖然已經給出，但是很多其他內容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者根據寫作提綱,給我們介紹了朋友Kate。層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補充的內容完成得也不錯。如She is so lovely and friendly that I love her very much.等。這些內容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如She is tall and thin with a pair of glasses.等。

考點：提綱類作文。