Question

12．書面表達根據要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定位置上．
常言道"良言一句三冬暖，惡語傷人六月寒"．假設你是李雷，你將要參加學校舉辦的英語演講比賽，主題是"語言的力量"，請你寫一篇英文演講稿，內容包括：
你的一次受老師或同學言語激勵的經歷（事情的經過以及對你的影響）；
呼吁同學們要注意自身言語對他人的影響．
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校的真實名稱、老師和同學的真實姓名．
2．語句連貫，字數80個左右．作文的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數．
Ladies and gentlemen，
How will words influence others？Let me tell you one of my experiences．                                 

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 Even when I became a middle school student，I failed to do things well．   甚至當我成為中學生的時候，我也不能把事情做好．這是when引導的時間狀語從句，當…時候．
 高分句型二
  I tried to do everything by myself and I found that I could do things well．   我試著自己做每件事，我發現我能做好事情．try to do sth．試著做某事．  I found that I could do things well．是賓語從句，I found 是主句，that I could do things well是從句．

解答 How will words influence others？Let me tell you one of my experiences【開頭點明主題】．Parents are always so nervous about their children's study that they do almost everything for them．I am just one of these children．Even when I became a middle school student，I failed to do things well．【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】．I began to doubt my ability and felt very sad．Then one day my deskmate said to me，"Always trust yourself．You can surely do things well．"Encouraged by what he said，I tried to do everything by myself and I found that I could do things well．【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】【正文部分詳細介紹自己的經歷】
Encouraging words can really help people a lot．【結尾緊扣主題】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．