Question

書面表達。將答案寫在答題卡的相應位置上。（共10分）

近年來由于極端天氣，我國西南地區放生了特大的旱情，霧霾天氣時有發生，所以我們應該認識到節水 節能 控制污染的重要性。以Let’s do something to save our environment為題寫一篇文章。

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Answer 1

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes have died. The bottoms of the rivers and the lakes have become grass land. So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the room with the used water. Second, we should save energy. For example, we must remember to turn off the lights when we leave. We'd better walk or ride instead of driving. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories. Let's act now to save our environment.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以Let’s do something to save our environment為題寫一篇文章。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作內容，主要包括：節水 節能 控制污染。主要內容雖然已經給出，但是很多其他內容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者根據題目要求, 說明了為了保護環境我們要怎樣節水、 節能、 控制污染。層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補充的內容完成得也不錯。如Let's act now to save our environment.等。這些內容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如So everyone should do something to save our environment. For example, we must remember to turn off the lights when we leave. We'd better walk or ride instead of driving.等。

考點：話題類作文。