Question

大多數中學生認為校園生活是豐富多彩的，學習是快樂有趣的。然而，無論在城市

還是農村學校都有一些厭學的學生。請圍繞該話題用英語談談你的看法。

要求：（1）內容包括 ① 中學生厭學的主要原因。

② 你對該現象的看法。

（2）字數：60-80詞。

（3）短文中不得出現你的真實姓名、學校名和地名。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

范文：

Most students believe that the life in school is colorful and interesting. However, there are still some students feeling tired of learning both in cities and countries.

Concerning the problem, the reasons are listed below. To begin with, they dislike the way that their teachers show. Besides, there is a lot of homework to do so they are stressed out. In addition, they feel bored about the courses.

From my point of view, students should be focused on study. As the saying goes “Study hard and you will make progress.”

Concerning the problem, the reasons are listed below. To begin with, they dislike the way that their teachers show. Besides, there is a lot of homework to do so they are stressed out. In addition, they feel bored about the courses.

From my point of view, students should be focused on study. As the saying goes “Study hard and you will make progress.”

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應認真閱讀要點，根據要點組織材料，確定寫作內容。寫作中做注意結合自己實際，認真談談中學生的厭學原因，這部分重點寫，然后談談自己對這個問題的看法。注意不要遺漏要點，適當發揮。結合材料可知本文主要是第三人稱，時態一般應該用一般現在時。注意情態動詞should后面動詞用原形。適當使用連詞，序數詞，注意從句的應用，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。