Question

17．每個人的成長歷程都是一種蛻變的過程，如從幼稚走向成熟，從逆境走向成功．請結合自己在某一方面"戰勝困難，取得進步"的經歷，以I am proud of myself為題寫一篇60～90詞的短文．
寫作要點：
1．你變化前后的情況．
2．促使你變化的主要原因．
3．你為自己感到自豪的理由．

注意：1．短文中不可以出現與考生本人相關的真實姓名和校名等信息．
2．寫作時可以參考下表中詞匯．
3．作文開頭已給出，開頭單詞不計入總詞數．

In the past	used to，be weak in，give up，…
Now	change，be better at，make progress，…
Reasons for making progress	encourage，learn from，practice，confident，…
Why are you proud of yourself？	…

I'm proud of myself
There are lots of difficulties in our life．If we overcome them and challenge ourselves，we will become mature（成熟）and proud of ourselves．            

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I①used to be a shy girl and stay in the classroom②instead of playing with classmates after class．過去我害羞，課后在教室待著，不出去和同學玩耍．
①用used to do sth表示過去常常，來說明自己的過去．
②instead of 表示代替，而不是，of是介詞，后加名詞代詞或動名詞，此處是跟動名詞；play with sb意為"和某人玩"．
【高分句型二】
I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me．我改變的如此多以至于很多人喜歡和我交朋友．
本句是so…that表示如此…以至于…，that引導的結果狀語從句．so是副詞修飾這里的形容詞much．其中的make friends with sb表示和誰交朋友．

解答 I'm proud of myself
There are lots of difficulties in our life．If we overcome them and challenge ourselves，we will become mature（成熟）and proud of ourselves．I used to be a shy girl and stay in the classroom instead of playing with classmates after class．【高分句型一】I only like playing computer games at home．Because I hated English，my English mark is very low in the exam．（變化前的樣子）Later，a girl came to my class，and she changed my life．（轉變的原因）She became my best friend．She asked me to play outside with others．She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud，to talk to her in English．I also practice English after school．（我的努力）Gradually，My English score was higher and higher．Now，I am a confident and outgoing girl．I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me．【高分句型二】（變化后的樣子）From then on，I have confidence to do better in the future（變化后的感受）．

點評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現障礙．可根據內容要點提示運用相關的句型結構靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．