Reasons | difficult and too much |
lazy and no interest | |
… | |
Effect | against the school rules |
Solutions | study hard |
ask…for help | |
Opinions | … |
分析 這是一篇圖表作文.內容是以"My opinion on copying others'homework"為題說說抄襲作業的原因和危害.時態主要為一般現在時.人稱主要為第一、三人稱.
寫作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文,即本文的寫作要點:
1.主要原因;作業多,難,懶惰
2.影響:違反學校規則
3.解決辦法;努力學習,尋求幫忙
4.你的看法
常用到的重點短語:
work out 解答出
do sb a favor 幫忙
stay up 熬夜
do harm to 對…有害
not only…but …不僅…而且…
【高分句型】
1.It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework.
it作為形式主語,that從句作為真正主語
2.The main reason is①that alarge amount of homework ②which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday.
①that從句作為表語,和is構成系表結構
②which是關系詞的定語從句,which作為主語,修飾先行詞homework.
3.①As far as I am concerned,as a student,we should②not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well.
①As far as I am concerned 就我而言
②not only…but …不僅…而且…連接前后兩個對等成分
解答 My opinion on copying others'homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework.【高分句型】There are several reasons for this phenomenon.The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday.(主要原因;作業多,難,)【高分句型】Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises,in fact,it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions.(影響;養成壞習慣,違反規則)
As far as I am concerned,as a student,we should not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well.【高分句型】If we have difficulties,we can ask our teachers and classmates for help.(解決辦法;努力學習,尋求幫忙)
We should work hard to gain knowledge.Let's do our best to prevent such bad behavior from spreading.(我的看法)
點評 這是一篇提綱作文,文章的題目已經給出,而且列出了三條細節.寫作文時要仔細審題,每一條都要寫到.要注意前后句的連接,不要遺漏要點,并適當發揮.根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態,主語是第一人稱,注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題.寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯系緊密,符合邏輯關系.
文章主要寫我對抄襲作業的看法,要點全部都寫出,并且增加了一些內容使文章更通順,更符合要求.文中使用很多短語,讓文章更加出彩,如It is known to us all that,a large amount of.,stay up late等.在平時的學習中,要注意點滴積累,這樣在寫作文時才能靈活運用.
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