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4．假如你是某報社英文專招的編輯Lily，下面是一個叫孫林的女孩給你發來的一封電子郵件，請根據郵件內容給她回復，并提出至少兩點建議．
注意：1．郵件中不能出現自己的真實姓名和校名．
2．詞數：80字左右，郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．

Dear Lily． Now I am new here．I can't understand what the teacher says．I am afraid to talk with my classmates in English．The biggest problem for me is that I can't read fast and I even couldn't sleep the night before big exams．Could you give me some advice？ Yours， Sun Lin

Dear Sun Lin
I'm sorry to learn that you are having some problems with your English learning．           ．
Yours，
Lily．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 you should try your best to speak English as much as possible．  你應該盡可能地多說英語． try one's best to do sth．  盡某人最大努力做某事．
高分句型二
  Listening to tapes and watching English movies can also help you．聽磁帶和看英語電影也可以幫助你．本句Listening to tapes and watching English movies 是動名詞做主語．

解答 Dear Sun Lin，
I'm sorry to learn that you are having s ome problems with your English learning．Here is some advice for you．【開頭點明主題】Firstly，you should try your best to speak English as much as possible【高分句型一，注意try one's best to do sth．使用】．Don't be afraid of making mistakes．Listening to tapes and watching English movies can also help you．【高分句型二，注意動名詞的使用】Secondly，you should start reading the books that you can understand．Remember not to look up the new words one by one while reading．Thirdly，don't think too much before exams．Listen to some light music the night before exams，and you will feel relaxed．【正文部分詳細介紹自己】
I hope you will feel better soon．【結尾緊扣主題】
Yours，Lily

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．