Question

假設你是林濤，請你給澳大利亞的筆友Sam寫一封信。告訴他你的家鄉近幾年來發生了哪些可喜的變化。

要求：1.意思連貫，條理清楚。

2.所給的提示詞必須都用上。90詞左右, 信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好(字數不計入總數)。

提示詞：buildings, living conditions, improve,kinds of, medical care

Dear Sam,___________________________________________________

 

 

 

Yours,

Lin Tao

 

Answer 1

I am very glad to see what’ve happened in my hometown. In my memory, the road used to be narrow ,But now more and more roads have appeared and people’s living condition have improved a lot. Building here are becoming taller and brighter. And there are more kinds of food and clothes to choose from. People can enjoy moe sorts of leisure activities. We can not only study in morden schools but also on the Internet. What’s more , it’s easier and quicker to use telephone or Qqto communicate with others. The most important change is about medical care system. Now people are not afraid of being sick.. Becaue they can get much help when they are badly sick.

Thanks to our government, wwe can live a happu life. From now on ,I will work harder to make my hometown more wonderful

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹家鄉的變化。根據提示詞可知要從居住，生活條件，醫療等方面描述。

【亮點說明】這篇短文內容完整，敘述條理，清晰。使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如In my memory，used to，more and more，not only but also，What’s more , Thanks to等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。