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16．假如你是李丹，請根據所給提示，用英文寫一篇推薦信，推薦王艷同學當選校優秀學生．詞數：80左右．信的開頭與結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數、
1．王艷，16歲；一個聰明的女孩
2．學東西快，數學、語文、英語學得很好．擅長歷史，對中國歷史了解很多．
3．喜愛體育．籃球打得很好，是�；@球隊的成員．
4．善良、勇敢，樂于助人．經常在車上給老人讓座．經常幫助王叔叔挑水．曾（once）用一塊濕毯子撲滅過一次火災；
Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award．
Wang Yan is 16 years old．She is a clever girl．She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．She knows （learns） a lot about Chinese history．She likes sports．She plays basketball well．She is a member of the school basketball team．She is kind and brave．She is helpful．She often gives a seat to the old people on the bus．She often helps Uncle Wang carry water．She once put out a fire with a wet blanket．
We think that Wang Yan should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Dan．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．她學得很快．她數學、中國和英語學的好．她擅長歷史．do well in 在…上做得好，和be good at意思一樣，避免了重復．
高分句型二
She often helps Uncle Wang carry water她經常幫王叔叔提水．help sb  do sth幫助某人做某事．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award．
Wang Yan is 16 years old．She is a clever girl．【要點一，王艷，16歲；一個聰明的女孩】She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．【高分句型一，固定詞組的使用】She knows （learns） a lot about Chinese history．【要點二，學東西快，數學、語文、英語學得很好．擅長歷史，對中國歷史了解很多】She likes sports．She plays basketball well．She is a member of the school basketball team．【要點三，喜愛體育．籃球打得很好，是�；@球隊的成員．】She is kind and brave．She is helpful．She often gives a seat to the old people on the bus．She often helps Uncle Wang carry water．【高分句型二，注意help sb，do sth．的使用】She once put out a fire with a wet blanket．【要點四，善良、勇敢，樂于助人．經常在車上給老人讓座．經常幫助王叔叔挑水．曾用一塊濕毯子撲滅過一次火災；】
We think that Wang Yan should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Dan

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