Question

根據中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信。信的開頭和結尾已經給出，其詞數不計入所完成的回信內，請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李華，收到你的筆友Jim的來信，信中談到他最近沉迷于電腦游戲中，他認為這不僅有損身心健康，而且還影響學習，為此，他很苦惱。請根據這封信的內容，給Jim寫一封回信，談談你的看法及建議。

Dear Li Hua, These days I always play computer games for a long time. As a result, it is difficult for me to finish my homework on time. Also I often feel sleepy when I have lessons. I know playing computer games is bad for my study and health, but I can’t stop doing it. I’m angry with myself. What should I do? Can you give me some advice? Please write to me soon. Yours, Jim

 

Dear Jim, Don’t be angry with yourself.                                                   Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
Don’t be angry with yourself. I really feel worried about you. I don’t think it’s right to spend too much time playing computer games. It is bad for not only your study but also your health.
As a student, schoolwork is the most important thing for you. So remember to finish your homework first after school. And it’s also a good idea to do some sports with your friends when you are free. That will help you forget computer games. What’s more, you’d better go to bed earlier to get enough sleep so that you can listen to the teacher carefully in class. I hope my advice can help you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析: 這是一篇應用文寫作，寫一封信。本文材料主要通過一份來信給出，故動筆前要認真閱讀來信，爭取對來信內容都有所回應。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
點評：注意寫作中的時態、人稱和數的問題，時態一般是一般現在時態，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。