Question

書面表達。（1題，滿分10分）

根據表格中提供的信息，寫出一篇短文介紹你及你的朋友琳達（Linda）的相同和不同之處。不少于70詞。

	不同點	相同點
琳達	1.比我高，更強壯；2.喜歡聽音樂； 3.每天鍛煉。	喜歡運動；各門功課都學得好； 喜歡閱讀，通常在周末一起去圖書館
我	1.喜歡看電視；2.每周鍛煉三次。

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Answer 1

I have a good friend. His name is Linda. We have something different. She is taller and stronger than I.She likes listening to music. She takes exercise every day. She wants to be a basketball player when she grows up. But I like watching TV. I do sports three times a week. I want to be a doctor when I grow up. But we have the same hobbies. We both like sports. We are both good at all subjects. We also like reading. We usually go to the library together at the weekend.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。文章內容很明確，就是寫我和朋友之間的相同和不同之處，并給出了相關的信息。在寫作時，主要文章的結構要清晰，不要漏掉信息點�？梢杂玫谝蝗朔Q來寫，用一般現在時。寫作時注意句子的完整性，主謂一致。可適當使用一些連接詞，使文章更緊湊，邏輯更清晰。

【亮點說明】這篇文章結構清晰明了，如使用句子 We have something different。我們有不同之處； But we have the same hobbies.但是我們也有相同的愛好；使文章更具條理性。文中也用到了很多短語，如take exercise，do sports，like doing sth., be good at, grow up等，意思表達清晰完整。

考點：材料類作文。