Question

5．請以I want to be              為題．寫一寫你將來的打算（包括你的目標和你將采取的行動），字數不少于60個字
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to protect these animals，I want to be a volunteer．為了保護這些動物，我想成為一名志愿者．
in order to為了，后跟動詞原形，作目的狀語；want to be，想成為…，動詞不定式作賓語．
高分句型二：
To be a good volunteer，I need to do more．要成為一名好的志愿者，我需要做的更多．
To be a good volunteer為動詞不定式作目的狀語；need to do sth需要做某事

解答 I want to be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
As we know，animals are our good friends．Hower，as we can see，some animals，especially rare animals，are becoming fewer and fewer．（引出話題）
In order to protect these animals，I want to be a volunteer．【高分句型一】（點明想成為一名志愿者）I am active and out-going．I like animals，such as cats，dogs，rabits as well as everything related to animals，like newspapers，magazines and videos．I often take part in the activities of protecing animals．For example，last month I presented a show called Stopping Hunting．Many people came and supported me．（成為志愿者的優勢）
To be a good volunteer，I need to do more．【高分句型二】I will read some books about animals．Meanwhile，I will join a club whose aim is to protect animals．（今后將采取的行動）
I believe I can do the work well．

點評 結合命題作文的特點，首先要審好題，嚴格按照要求去組織文章，并抓住重點．要注意語句通順、意思連貫．在闡述理想的原因的時候要恰當使用表示順序的詞，使這一部分很有條理．要善于運用好的句型如主語從句、動詞不定式和倒裝的使用等為文章增色，表達更流暢．要習慣用英語式的思維去組織句子，避免漢語式的英語．