Question

7．上周，你班同學王磊騎電動車匆忙過馬路時被一輛急駛的出租車撞倒，司機逃跑了，王磊只有自救．幸運的是，他傷勢不重，右腿骨折，但是受了驚嚇．為此你班開了有關交通安全方面的主題班會，讓王磊就親身經歷現身說法，同學們就如何減少交通事故和萬一遇到交通事故應如何自救等問題展開了討論，假如你是王磊，請以How can We save ourselves？為題寫一篇短文，要點如下：

事故	1．上學路上你騎電動車被出租車撞倒，司機逃跑了…
	2．傷勢不重，右腿骨折
措施	1．保持鎮靜，打電話求助
	2．保留現場
教訓	1．遵守交通規則
	2．過馬路要推車慢行…
	3．…

要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關信息，并作適當發揮；
3）詞數：100詞左右；
4）不得使用真實姓名和校名等．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I also kept the scene so that the policemen can find out the information as quickly as possible．
句中"so that the policemen can find out the information as quickly as possible"為目的狀語從句．句中短語有"find out  查明，發現"、"as…as possible  盡可能地…"．這句話意為：我也保護了現場以便于警察可以盡快地查明真相．
高分句型二：
In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．
句中使用短語有："in short 總而言之"、"need to do sth 需要做某事"、"stay away from…遠離…"．這句話意為：總而言之，每個人都需要學習怎么保護自己，遠離危險．

解答 How Can We Protect Ourselves
Last week，I was knocked down by a taxi when I rode to school．After that，the driver ran away．Luckily，I wasn't badly hurt．My right leg was hurt．At first，I was afraid．But I kept calm after a while，then I called for help．I also kept the scene so that the policemen can find out the information as quickly as possible．【高分句型一】（講述事故）
The accident gave me a lesson that self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers．But how can we protect ourselves？Here are some suggestions．（總結教訓）
First，we should obey the traffic rules．Also，we should be careful when we cross the road．Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep us safe．In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．【高分句型二】（提出建議）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．