Question

Write a passage on “A letter to my headmaster/headmistress ” in at least 60 words according to the given situation (以“給校長的一封信”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的文章。)
提示：初中學習階段肯定給你留下許多的回憶。有甜美，有苦澀，這些都是寶貴的人生經歷。在即將告別你的初中生活，請你以Susan的名義給你的校長寫一封信，分享一件讓你最難忘的校園活動以及提出一個你最希望學校改進的方面。
（注意：短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。）

Answer 1

A letter to my headmaster
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
How time flies！I’m going to leave this school. In this school I had a lot of great time. But what I won’t forget is the basketball match held one year ago. It was between Grade 8 students and Grade 9 students. During the match, the players played very hard. To our surprise, Grade 8 students won. Grade 9 students also felt happy for them and said “Congratulations!” to them. They became good friends.
Well, sports are very important for us young students. We can learn to work together and make good friends. But I think our school needs to build a new sports area. It should have a soccer section, a basketball section, and a ping-pong section. I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.
Thank you for your reading this letter.
Yours faithfully,
Susan

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以A letter to my headmaster為題寫一篇作文，即給校長的一封信。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的重點內容。一是分享一件讓你最難忘的校園活動，比如一次籃球比賽；二是提出一個你最希望學校改進的方面，如比賽場地可以更加專業化，分出籃球區、足球區、乒乓球區等。重點內容雖然已經給了我們，但是很多內容都需要我們自己去完成，讓它變得完整、合理，內容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。最重要的一點要注意敘述那件難忘的活動時，要用一般過去時態；你希望學校改進的地方可以用將來時態或者是現在時態的適當句型來表達。
【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者首先寫了一次難忘的籃球比賽，然后向校長提出一個建議。從整篇來看，層次清晰，內容完整。短文中有些內容完成不錯。如Grade 9 students also felt happy for them and said “Congratulations!” to them. They became good friends.等。這些內容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如How time flies！I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.等。