Question

8．請以"My best friend---"為題，寫一篇短文．
要求：1可從外形，性格，愛好方面進行介紹．
2意思連貫，通順，不得出現真實人名或學校名稱，詞數60
3圍繞主題，適當發揮．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①She is always ready to help others，so she has lots of friends．她總是樂于助人，所以她有很多朋友．句子中be ready to do sth表示準備做某事，后面跟to引導的不定式形式．
②She is good at English and she often helps our classmates with their English．她擅長英語，經常幫助同學學習英語．句子中be good at表示擅長做某事，help sb with sth表示幫著某人做某事．

解答 My best friend
I have a lot of friends and my best friend is Tina．（引出話題）She is from the USA．She is fourteen years old．We are in the same class．She is tall and thin．She always wears a pair of small and round glasses and she is often wearing black clothes．She is kind and generous．She is always ready to help others，so she has lots of friends．（高分句型） （介紹她的一些個人信息）She is good at English and she often helps our classmates with their English（高分句型）（介紹她的特長）．Everyone in my class likes her．She wants to be a social worker when she grows up．（介紹她的理想）

點評 這篇范文內容完整，意思連貫，是一篇比較好的作文．文中開門見山的點明了自己的好朋友是Tina，然后對Tina的外形、性格、愛好等做了詳細的介紹，使我們對Tina有了一個初步的了解．這篇作文在寫作時嚴格按照了題目中所列出的要點，逐條翻譯，這樣做可以避免遺漏要點，但同時又使得文章太瑣碎，缺少連貫性．寫作時可以將相似的要點歸類表達，使文章的意思更加連貫．