Question

 假設你是Jane,某英語報社編輯部舉辦了一次征文比賽，話題為"環境保護"。請你根據下面的圖片提示，以Stop Destroying Our Earth為題寫一篇文章，向該報社投稿。

要求：1.詞數:80詞左右（文章的開頭和結尾巳經給出，不計人總詞數）； 2.根據圖片信息可適當增添細節，以使行文連貫。

題型分析：本次寫作是使用一般現在時，根據文字及圖片提示，呼吁人們保護地球。

行文思路：本次寫作可以分三部分進行：第一部分簡要點出部分人沒能認識到保護環境的必要性；第二部分是根據圖片提示：人們砍了太多的樹—水土流失—土壤沙化，描寫沙漠的形成；第三部分表達自己的觀點和發出號召。

高分點撥：使用but,so ， when,and等連詞，以使文章通順、流暢；同時寫作時注意給文章分段，以便所述內容能一目了然。

佳作展示：

Stop Destroying Our Earth The world is developing very quickly,but

If we don't stop destroying the earth,we will die out one day.

Answer 1

 Stop Destroying Our Earth The world is developing very quickly, but many people still haven't realized the need to protect the earth. We are destroying the earth. It has become a serious problem.

  People are building a lot of buildings, so they cut down more and more trees. When it rains，the rain washes the soil away，and because of this, there are more floods. When the wind is strong, it blows the soil away and farmlands become desert. That's why we have so many sandstorms.

  If we don't stop destroying the earth,we will die out one day.