Question

如今，在我們身邊，父母均在外打工的留守兒童比比皆是。關注留守兒童（left-behind children），構建和諧社會的重要內容。關注留守兒童，要靠全社會的共同努力。你認為留守兒童面臨的主要問題有那些？為了解決留守兒童的問題，請你向當地政府提建議：提示：1.缺乏父母的關愛(be short of love)，性格孤僻(lonely)，學習壓力大、自卑。2.缺乏安全保障，缺乏家庭關愛（families' care），容易犯錯誤甚至犯罪（do some thing against the laws）。
建議：1.學校建立留守兒童心里咨詢室（Psychological Counseling Room），老師應該把愛播撒到每一
個留守兒童的心田。2.政府利用節假日建立留守兒童家長學校（ parents 'school for these children）。 3.社會各界開展與留守兒童一幫一結對子的活動（hand-in-hand activity） 。4.父母盡可能回到孩子身邊，給孩子生活上和學習上的幫助和關愛。
表達要求：語言流暢、書寫規范、卷面整潔、字數不少于80個。
Dear Mayor:
I'm a middle school student. I'm writing to tell you something around us.

Answer 1

Dear Mayor:
I'm a middle school student. I'm writing to tell you something around us. Nowadays, there are many-left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them are from the countryside, you know, they have many  problem. They are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents' love. At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because they're short of their families' care. How to solve their problems? In my eyes, the government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays, you can organize "hand-in-hand" activity to call on more people to help them. You can also raise money to donate to these children. As the song says: "If everyone gives their love,  the world will be better." It's very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.
Best wishes to you!

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