Question

書面表達。（10分）

健康的生活習慣對于成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認為健康的生活習慣應當是怎樣的呢？請根據下面信息提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

健康飲食。2）早睡早起，不熬夜。3）參加運動，強身健體。

Healthy Habits

I think healthy habits are very important for us. As we know, __________

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Answer 1

Healthy Habits

I think healthy habits are very important for us. As we know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habits? First, we must keep a balanced diet. Different foods help us in different ways. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may causes many illnesses. Second, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Finally, we had better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.

As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求以Healthy Habits健康習慣為標題寫一篇短文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括三部分的內容。一是健康飲食。二是早睡早起，不熬夜。三是參加運動，強身健體。提綱雖然已經列好，但是很多內容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者從三方面講述了怎樣養成健康習慣。文章中作者自己添加的句子如Different foods help us in different ways. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may causes many illnesses.Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. 使用到動名詞充當主語；We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. 使用到短語 instead of。這些內容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.

考點：提綱類作文。