Question

請根據下列表格的提示, 寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文。（80詞左右）

過去	現在
1.舊房	1.高樓
2.河水骯臟	2.河水清澈
3.步行、騎自行車上班	3.乘公交車、小汽車上班
4.道路狹窄	4.環形路寬闊
5.居住條件差	5.居住環境舒適

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should value the present life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓介紹我們家鄉的變化的文章。本篇文章逐一介紹了所列舉的內容，與出題人的意圖相符。主要是考查used to do sth .另外，寫作時，還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者講述了過去與現在我們家鄉的變化。這些內容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable..等。

考點：提綱類作文。