Question

1．假如你班將舉行以"中學生自我保護"為主題的英語班會，請你根據下面的提示寫一封100次左右的安全倡議書，可適當發揮．
內容提示：
1．不帶管制刀具到學校；
2．不私自下河游泳；
3．不打架；
4．上學的路上注意安全，遇到緊急情況要報警；
參考詞匯：
管制刀具  restricted knives   緊急情況  emergency
Asweknow，safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlives．So，weshouldtryourbesttomakesurewearesafe．We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems．Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission．And，we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned．Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home．Furthermore，if we meet some emergency，we must call for help from the police or our teachers．
In a word，following these safety rules above can make us live in peace．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是就中學生自我保護問題，向全校學生發出倡議．時態主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
（1）不帶管制刀具到學校；
（2）不私自下河洗澡；
（3）不打架；
（4）上學的路上注意安全，遇到緊急情況要報警；

常用到的重點短語：
restricted knives or things管制刀具：
have a bath洗澡
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
be friendly to sb 對某人友好
pay attention to 留意，關注
on one's way to  sp．在某人去某地的路上
furthermore此外
in a word總之
make sb do sth讓某人做某事
 in peace和平地
高分句型：
1．①Furthermore，②if we meet some emergency，we must call for help from the police or our teachers．
①furthermore此外，引出下文．
②if引導的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態動詞must，從句用一般現在時代替一般將來時．
2．①In a word，②following these safety rules above can ③make us live in peace．
①in a word總之，總述以上內容．
②following these safety rules above 動名詞短語做主語
③make sb do sth讓某人做某事，make的用法

解答 How to Protect Ourselves
As we know，safety is the most important thing in our lives．So，we should try our best to make sure we are safe．We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems．（不帶管制刀具到學校）Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission．（不私自下河洗澡）And，we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned．（不打架） Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home．Furthermore，if we meet some emergency，we must call for help from the police or our teachers．（上學的路上注意安全，遇到緊急情況要報警）（高分句型）
In a word，following these safety rules above can make us live in peace．（高分句型）

點評 初中英語的作文，著重考察學生連詞成句的能力，要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面．在對所出現的問題或是采取的措施描寫中注意使用連詞或是好的句式．對于中學作文的寫作，盡量將所學的知識運用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結構緊湊的文章，不要出現中式英文．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文．