Question

書面表達:( 10分)

在每個人的成長過程中或多或少會有一些改變，請以“How I’ve Changed!”為題寫一段話，介紹一下你的過去與現在的不同。詞數：60--80詞左右。

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Answer 1

How I’ve changed!

My life on weekends has changed a lot in the past two years．You know I used to go shopping with my mother, and I played sports with friends on weekends．But now I have no time to play．I have to go to school on weekends because we have many classes all day．At night, I used to watch TV, read a newspaper or a magazine and I could also chat online．Now, I feel stressed out．I have to do lots of homework．Sometimes I have to study for the tests．It is boring．I really miss the old days

【解析】:

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。要求以第一人稱的方式敘述自己在過去和現在的學習生活的不同。主要用到兩種時態：一般現在時和一般過去時態（uesd to do句式）。所給內容已經很是詳細，只要注意句式結構正確，文章調理連貫就可以了。

【亮點說明】這篇短文短文通順完整，表達清楚, 語言基本無誤。能正確運用句式uesd to do的結構；I feel stressed out；I have to go to school on weekends because we have many classes all day，這些句子和短語也為文章增色不少，適當的運用了連詞，使文章更緊湊。

考點：提綱作文