Question

書面表達（共1小題，計15分）

隨著車輛的增加，城市交通越來越擁擠。假如你叫李敏，前不久和同學一起討論了the advantages and disadvantages of using bikes。現在請你根據他們的觀點和你自己的觀點。給你的外籍老師Susan寫一篇關于這次討論的匯報材料。

Advantages	Disadvantages	My opinion
Protect the environment	It’s slower than buses and cars
Be good for our health	It’s not suitable for a long trip
It’s cheap

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Susan,

We had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of using bikes recently.

Some students think it is useful. First of all, it is good to protect the environment. Second, riding a bike usually is good for our health. And for the last, it’s cheaper to buy a bike than a car. However, others have different opinions. In their opinion, it’s slower than buses and cars. What’s more, it’s not suitable for a long trip. It’s tiring. I think we should use bikes as much as possible. Because it’s an environmentally friendly way of transport. Further more，it’s proper exercise to ride bikes for about 30 minutes to an hour.

【解析】

試題分析：根據表格的內容可知這部分用一般現在時，主語用第三人稱，第三列表達自己的觀點，應該用第一人稱。要注意主謂一致。

【亮點說明】短文層次清楚，句與句之間連貫性好。同時短文用了一些短語和句式，如: riding a bike usually is good for our health. What’s more,等。 提醒學生平時注意積累一些短語和句式，以便在寫作中使用。

考點：提綱類作文。