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3．隨著手機功能日益增多，越來越多的年輕人沉迷于手機娛樂活動，成為"手機控"一族．請你根據兩幅漫畫和以下提示寫一篇短文．

"手機控"的表現	沉迷于手機娛樂活動（聊天看電影等），與朋友和家人的交流減少，離開手機會有焦慮等異常情緒表現…
"手機控"的危害	對健康不利，影響學習，走路時看手機尤其危險…
你的建議	…

參考詞匯：
手機控：a phine freak 焦慮的：anxious  沉迷于：be addicted to…微信：wechat
低頭族：phubbing
注意：1．內容包括所給提示信息，可適當發揮；
2．文中不得出現自己的真實姓名和學校名稱；
3.90個單詞左右，開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數．
Today many people，especially young people，have become phone freaks．They                ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①Besides，②focusing on mobile phone entertainment can affect students'study．另外，沉迷于手機娛樂會影響學生的學習．
①besides 另外
②動名詞短語做主語．focus on專注于．
【高分句型二】
①If they fill their time this way，they won't have too much spare time ②to think about phone entertainment如果他們這樣讓自己的時間充滿，就不會有更多的空閑時間去想手機娛樂．
①if 引導的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現的規則．
②動詞不定式做目的狀語．

解答 Today many people，especially young people，are phone freaks．They spend a lot of time playing games，seeing movies，or reading novels on their smart phone，and thus communicate with their family and friends less．Without phone in hand，they will feel anxious and don't know what to do．（"手機控"的表現）As we know，too long screen time is not good for health．It does great harm to our neck and eyes．Besides，focusing on mobile phone entertainment can affect students'study【高分句型一】．It can also be dangerous if you do it when crossing a street（"手機控"的危害）I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends．They should also pay more attention to their studies．If they fill their time this way，they won't have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment．【高分句型二】（我的建議）

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