Question

書面表達（10分）

Kate是你的好朋友，近幾年她變化很大。請根據下列表格中的信息，以80 詞左右簡要介紹以下Kate的成長變化。

Kate	過去	現在	Kate
外貌	個子矮，短發	個子高了很多，長發	外貌
愛好	打兵乓球、看電視、網上聊天	彈鋼琴、看書、散步	愛好
性格	外向	內向	性格

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Answer 1

Kate is my friend. She has changed a lot in the past years.

She used to be short and have short hair. Now she is much taller, 1.78 m, and she has long hair.

She used to play table tennis, watch TV a lot and chat with me on the Internet, but now she plays the piano and often goes for a walk. She also likes reading a lot. She used to be outgoing, but now she seems to be a little bit quiet.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如She has changed a lot in the past years.等，but now等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。