Question

書面表達

“世界無煙日(Non-smoking Day)”那天，某中學對該校學生吸煙情況進行了一次調查，結果如圖所示。請就此話題用英語寫一篇短文。

要求：1．對調查結果進行描述。

2．表明自己的看法并提出建議。

3．所寫內容符合“世界無煙日”主題。

4．詞數80個左右。

提示詞語：do a survey about…(做一個有關……的調查)， 3％of the students(百分之三的學生)

 

Answer 1

【答案】

On Non—smoking Day, a school did a survey about how many students smoke．Here are the results：3％of the students often smoke．7％of the students smoke sometimes．These students say they smoke just for fun and they look cool while smoking．Nearly everyone knows smoking does no good to people’s health，especially for teenagers．As students，we should not smoke．Those who smoke should give up smoking．And if our family members smoke，we should try to stop them．Students who have never smoked should never try it

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，圍繞世界無煙日這個主題用英語寫一篇短文，要求對調查結果進行描述，表明自己的看法并提出建議，本文給出了提示詞，語句通順，符合邏輯，尤其表明自己的看法，向中學生發出倡議。