Question

書面表達。(10分)

請你以David的身份給筆友Mary寫一封信, 介紹你自己和你家人的情況。你可以談談他們的工作和他們所喜歡的食品。信的開頭和末尾已經給出。你需要用下面的提示詞: family, happy, teacher, doctor, fish, chicken, vegetables,可適當發揮。要求60-70詞。

Dear Mary,

I’m David. I’ m from England.

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Yours,

David

Answer 1

Dear Mary,

I’m David. I’m from England. I want to tell you about my family. Four people are in my family. They’re my mother, my father, my sister and I. My father is an English teacher. He likes fish very much. My mother is a doctor. She likes cooking. Chicken is her favorite food. My sister Julia and I are in the same school. We don’t like eating vegetables. But my parents tell us to eat vegetables. They are good for us. Look! We have a happy family.

Yours,

David

【解析】

試題分析：此篇文章讓小作者介紹自己和自己的家人的情況。小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如We don’t like eating vegetables. But my parents tell us to eat vegetables. They are good for us.等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理.

考點：考查命題類作文。