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隨著我市創衛工作的不斷推進，鹽城已成為一個具有現代化氣息的城市, 它吸引著許多游客來此旅游、投資、學習。展示鹽城人民的精神風貌是每一位鹽城人的職責。請以 “To Be Lovely Yanchengnese為題寫一篇短文。

要點如下：

社會公德 (如：主動讓座、遵守交通規則、助人為樂)

環境保護 (如：保護花草樹木、節約能源)

公共禮儀 (如：在公共場所不抽煙、不大聲喧嘩、不亂扔垃圾)

作為學生，我們應該……（不少于兩點）

參考詞語：遵守交通規則 obey the traffic rules, 花草樹木 plants and trees

注意：不要逐句翻譯以上要點，可適當發揮。

詞數： 80左右，標點符號不占格。文章開頭已給出，不計入詞總數。

To Be Lovely Yanchengnese

Yancheng is developing quickly. It has become a modern city. To be lovely Yanchengnese, we should try our best to show its beauty. We should

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

To Be Lovely Yanchengnese

Yancheng is developing quickly. It has become a modern city. To be lovely Yanchengnese, we should try our best to show its beauty. We should o anything from ourselves ,such as not waste water or electic power and so on. As middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we can protect it by not throwing rubbish away. We can use materials which do no harm to the enviornment.Besides it, we should persuade people joining us as much as posible. If everyone can do this our world will be more beatiful and tomorrow is another day.

Let's do our best to make our city more and more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：such as；for example；as much as possible；and so on；more and more等等。學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。