Question

書面表達（共15分）

請根據下表提示用英語介紹Tom過去和現在的情況，并就此事談談你的看法及對他的建議。

要求：1．書寫規范整潔，80詞左右；

2．短文必須包括表格中的信息，條理清晰，觀點明確，意思連貫。

3. 短文開頭已給出，請接下去寫，不計入總詞數。

過去	喜歡看書，功課好，花很多時間學習和鍛煉.
現在	因沉溺于玩電腦游戲和看電視導致對學習沒興趣，上課睡覺，不能完成作業，成績差。
你的看法	玩電腦游戲可以使人放松，但…… 看電視能增長知識，但……
你的建議	（至少發揮兩點）

Tom has changed a lot in the last few years.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Tom has changed a lot in the last few years.

He used to like reading books and do well in his lessons .He also spent much time studing and doing exercises at school. But now he is so crazy about computer games and watching TV that he has no interest in his schoolwork and doesn't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, he can't hand in your homework on time and he often sleeps in class. Perhaps playing computer games can make him feel relaxed, but if he spends too much time on it,he will have less time to study. And it may be bad for his health. For example, it can hurt his eyes and hands.

I hope he should concentrate more on his schoolwork. Why not take part in some after-school activities when he feels bored? Why not spend more free time chatting with his friends?

【解析】

試題分析: 給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者把列舉的要點都寫了進去。這些內容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如But now he is so crazy about computer games and watching TV that he has no interest in his schoolwork and doesn't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class.

考點：考查表格類作文。