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20．李克強總理將"全民閱讀"寫入了《政府工作報告》，倡導全民熱愛閱讀．2015年4月23日是江蘇省首個全民閱讀日．目前，學校也開展了各種閱讀活動．請根據以下要點，談談同學們在閱讀方面存在的問題以及你對閱讀的理解和看法，并給同學們提出一些建議．

閱讀現狀	1．一些同學作業多沒空閱讀，認為閱讀沒用，是浪費時間； 2．一些同學沉迷于網絡游戲或者看一些無聊的電子書；
你的看法	1．獲得新知識，開闊眼界； 2．使人心情愉快而放松；
你的建議	1．多花時間讀好書，努力讓閱讀成為一種好習慣； 2．和父母、同學一起閱讀并分享讀書的感受； …（至少一點）

注意：
1．文中不得出現你的真實姓名和學校名稱；
2．語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，適當發揮，書寫規范；
3．詞數90左右，開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數．
Enjoy reading，enjoy life
Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report．It is really meaningful for us to read books in our daily life．Some students don't have any free time to read books because of too much homework．They think it's useless to read them and it's a waste of time．Some students are crazy about playing games or reading some boring books online．
I think we can get a lot of knowledge by reading．It can also open up our eyes and make us feel happy and relaxed．So I advise everybody to spend more time reading and try to develop a good habit of reading．Sometimes we can share our feelings with out parents and friends．
Good books are good friends．Let's start to read now．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Some students don't have any free time to read books because of too much homework一些同學因為作業多沒空閱讀
because of…因為…
【高分句型二】
I think we can get a lot of knowledge by reading我認為通過閱讀能獲取大量的知識．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．

解答 Enjoy reading，enjoy life   
 Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report．It is really meaningful for us to read books in our daily life．
Some students don't have any free time to read books because of too much homework．【高分句型一】They think it's useless to read them and it's a waste of time．Some students are crazy about playing games or reading some boring books online．（閱讀現狀）
I think we can get a lot of knowledge by reading【高分句型二】．It can also open up our eyes and make us feel happy and relaxed．（你的看法）So I advise everybody to spend more time reading and try to develop a good habit of reading．Sometimes we can share our feelings with out parents and friends．（你的建議）
Good books are good friends．Let's start to read now．

點評 寫作時要注意要點齊全，不能漏寫，并且要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規則的正確性，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達流暢．