Question

11．為了使生活更美好，社會需要正能量（positive energy）．生活中，我們需要他人的幫助，也要學會幫助他人．請你在網上給What would you do？本期節目留言，內容包括：
1．你對節目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；
2．說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；
3．呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量．
作文要求：
1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名．
2．語句連貫，詞數80個左右． 作文的開頭已經給出，不必抄寫在試卷上，也不計入總詞數．
In the program，a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop．I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need．
The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home．I tried my best to make her stop crying．When I knew she was lost，I helped her make a call to her dad and sta yed with her until he arrived．I found it pleasant to give others a hand．
In my opinion，we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others'help．I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy．As the saying goes，"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．"．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是談談生活中的正能量，呼吁大家互幫互助．時態主要為一般現在時和一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．你對節目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；
2．說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；
3．呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量．
常用到的重點短語：
adj+enough to do sth 足夠怎樣做某事
in need在危急中
on one's way to…去某地的路上
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
stop doing sth 停止做某事
help sb do sth幫某人做某事
give sb a hand幫助某人
be supposed to應該
【高分句型】
1．I really admire her①because she was②brave enough to help the woman③in need．
①because引導的原因狀語從句．
②adj+enough to do sth 足夠怎樣做某事．
③in need作為后置定語，修飾the woman．
2．I found①it pleasant to ②give others a hand．
①it是形式賓語，動詞不定式是真正賓語．
②give sb a hand幫助某人．

解答 In the program，a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop．I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need．【高分句型】（你對節目中挺身而出的顧客的看法）
   The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home．I tried my best to make her stop crying．When I knew she was lost，I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived．I found it pleasant to give others a hand．【高分句型】（你幫助別人的一件事例）
    In my opinion，we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others'help．I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy．As the saying goes，"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．"（呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量）

點評 提綱作文是一項能夠充分考查學生語言綜合運用能力的題型．主要考查學生運用已學的語言基礎知識和已掌握的英語寫作技能準確表達客觀事實，闡述個人觀點，進行思想交流的書面表達能力．為了提高書面表達水平，平時應加強閱讀，應背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎知識，掌握常用文體的寫作方法．其實，用英文寫信，記日記等都是學生力所能及且行之有效的練習寫作的好方法．