Question

請你以“My spare time “ 為題，描述自己的課余生活。要求60-----80個單詞。
提示詞；be interested in ; be good at , be busy with ,weekends ,enjoy ,like, spend  --in

Answer 1

I’m interested in playing computer games .I’m good at swimming and playing basketball , but I have no time .From Monday to Friday ,I am busy with my study and do much homework both in the daytime and in the evening .So I have my spare time only on weekends . In the afternoon, I usually spend most of time in playing with my friends . Sometimes I help my parents with housework. In the evening, I often go to moves, My favourite moves are Superman and Spiderman, I want to be a hero to help people in the future .

試題分析：本文的題目是my spare time，介紹自己的課余生活，也就是介紹學習之外從事的活動，范圍比較廣泛。書寫時，注意根據時間來安排課余活動，不要用排比性的句型泛泛談論，要切中主題。書寫時，要注意人稱應該用第一人稱，而時態應該用一般現在時。還應該注意連詞的應用等。
【亮點說明】本書面表達書寫能按照時間的順序來安排，使得整篇文章比較有條理，思路也很清晰。文中能正確運用所給的提示詞，并且，書寫時注意了，句子之間的銜接，運用了一些必要的連詞如but、so等。一些句型運用的也很到位，如 My favourite moves are Superman and Spiderman, I want to be a hero to help people in the future 等這些都為文章添色不少。