Question

10．為配合創建"綠色健康校園"工作，學生會發起以"Make Our School Greener"為主題的英語征文比賽．請根據以下信息寫一篇短文，短文題目和開頭已給出．
要點提示：
1．愛護校園內的花草樹木
2．保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物
3．節約用水、堅持鍛煉…
注意：
1．詞數80左右；開頭已給出‘不計入總字數．
2．結合以上要點，可圍繞主題適當發揮，增加細節，以使行文連貫．
3．文中不得出現你的真實姓名和學校名稱．
Make Our School Greener
In order to make our school greener，I think we shoulddo many things，which can be listed as follows．
First of all，never destroy the flowers and trees in our school．Besides，we should keep the school environment neat and clean，thus throwing away the waste should be forbidden．Meanwhile，try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the classroom is empty．What's more，regular exercise can help us stay healthy and build up our body．We should also be polite to others，and try our best to get on well with each other．In short，whatever you do，please remember to lead a green and healthy life．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是為配合你校創建"綠色健康學校"工作的全面展開，校學生會發起以"Make Our School Greener"為主題的英語征文比賽．時態主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第一，二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
（1）愛護校園內的花草樹木（2）保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物（3）節約用水，堅持鍛煉
常用到的重點短語：
keep sth+adj 保持某物怎么樣的
throw away 亂扔
meanwhile 同時
try to do sth 盡力做某事
forget to do sth 忘記去做某事
turn off 關掉
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
be polite to sb 對某人禮貌
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．①Besides，we should②keep the school environment neat and clean，③thus ④throwing away the waste ⑤should be forbidden．
①besides 另外
②keep sth+adj 保持某物怎么樣的
③thus 因此，表結果
④throw away 亂扔．動名詞短語做主語．
⑤情態動詞的被動語態：情態動詞+be+過去分詞．
2．①Meanwhile，②try to save water③if necessary and never ④forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or ⑤when the classroom is empty．
①meanwhile 同時
②try to do sth 盡力做某事
③if necessary是省略句，完整表達是if it is necessary．
④forget to do sth 忘記去做某事  turn off 關掉
⑤when引導的時間狀語從句．
3．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．
if引導的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現的規則．

解答 Make Our School Greener
In order to make our school greener，I think we  should do many things，which can be listed as follows．
First of all，never destroy the flowers and trees in our school．（愛護校園內的花草樹木）Besides，we should keep the school environment neat and clean，thus throwing away the waste should be forbidden．【高分句型】（保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物）Meanwhile，try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the classroom is empty．【高分句型】（節約用水，離開教室前記得關燈）
What's more，regular exercise can help us stay healthy and build up our body．（堅持鍛煉，增強體質）We should also be polite to others，and try our best to get on well with each other．（禮貌待人，同學間相處融洽）
In short，whatever you do，please remember to lead a green and healthy life．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．【高分句型】（總結）

點評 本題是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，寫作時要注意文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點，同時還要注意句式的正確運用，例如祈使句和情態動詞就是本篇作文的關鍵．寫作時，要注意句式的變化使用．