Question

書面表達 （本大題共10分）

假如你叫Billy，是無錫市某初級中學的一名九年級學生，學校將組織由學生推選“十佳教師”的評選活動。你準備寫一封推薦信給校長Mr Smith，推薦你的英語老師Mrs Lin當選，請你根據要點提示寫一封電子郵件給Mr Smith。

內容要點如下：

四十幾歲，教英語已有十幾年；

耐心，為我們重復語法規則；

嚴格，要求我們盡可能經常復習所學內容；

4. 善良并充滿愛心，……

5. 令我們驚訝的是……

注意：

1. 推薦信須包括所有內容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 第4、5要點的內容須用2～3句話作適當發揮；

3. 詞數80個左右，推薦信的開頭和結尾句已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to recommend our English teacher Mrs Lin as one of the top ten teachers.

I think Mrs Lin is the most suitable person to be the top teacher. I hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Billy

Answer 1

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to recommend our English teacher Mrs Lin as one of the top ten teachers. She’s in her forties and has taught English for over ten years. She’s patient enough to repeat grammar rules for us. She is strict with us. She requires us to go over what we’ve learnt as often as possible. She’s also kind and has a heart full of love. She’s willing to offer help to the students in trouble. To our surprise, she donates her money to three poor students in a village in the west of China every year.

I think Mrs Lin is the most suitable person to be the top teacher. I hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Billy

【解析】

試題分析：這篇文章叫小作者寫一封推薦信給校長Mr Smith，推薦你的英語老師Mrs Lin當選。小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的文章的內容。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如She’s patient enough to repeat grammar rules for us. She is strict with us. She requires us to go over what we’ve learnt as often as possible. She’s also kind and has a heart full of love. She’s willing to offer help to the students in trouble. To our surprise, she donates her money to three poor students in a village in the west of China every year.等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理.

考點：考查提綱類作文。