Question

書面表達（本題有1小題；共計15分）

“燦爛星空，誰是真的英雄?”做出驚天動地業績的人是英雄，為追求真理獻出生命的人是英雄，在平凡崗位上默默奉獻的人是英雄……

假如你班正準備出一期以“我們心中的英雄”為主題的英語墻報，下面是一部分同學們做的一些信息卡，

Dr Norman Bethune Natlonality(國籍): Canada Hobby: taking photos Main stories: saved a lot of Chinese people; invented medical tools…	Liu Xiang Nationality: China Hobby: singing Main stories: won the first Olympic gold medal in the men' s 110m hurdles event in Athens; set a world record in the same event in Lausanne …
Name:_______ Nationality:_____________ Hobby:________________ One main stary:_________

你選擇其中一張卡片，也可以選擇別的英雄人物，以The Hero in My Heart為題寫一篇短文。

要求：①包含所選信息卡上的內容；②適當拓展，如學英雄的感想、行動等；③不能出現表明你身份的信息；④詞數80-100詞左右，不含已給出部分。(本小題15分)

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version (1)

The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart.

He was a great doctor from Canada.

Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938, he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn't stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.

I am deeply moved by his stories. So I'll work hard today and do my best to help others.

One possible version (2)

The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sportsman.

Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004, he won his first Olympic gold medal in the men,s 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the same event in Lausanne.

Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings well. With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder from now on.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給定材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹“我們心中的英雄”的文章，題目中給出的材料較為詳細，動筆前要根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱。確定句子的時態。關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，要適當表達自己觀點。寫作中要注意語意通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連詞。

【亮點說明】這篇文章使用了一些的固定句型及短語，為文章增色不少。如be good at擅長，so…that如此……以致，encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人做某事等等。

考點：話題作文。