Question

8．母愛情深，父愛無價，師恩無限，友情可貴．在生活中，有許多值得感恩的人，請以Love for ______ 為題，寫一篇短文．
要求：1．請將題目補充完整．
2．用80-120詞寫一篇完整的短文．描述你所感恩的人；感恩的原因并列舉感恩的事例；你將為他/她做些什么來表達你的感激之情．
提示：1．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
2．短文中不能出現真實的人名、校名、地名及其他相關真實信息．
3．凡照抄本試卷里的文章段落，一律不得分．
Love formy mother
We need love，we also need to love others．The person I love most is my mother．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．Shi is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She bought ①whatever I needed for my study，②even though she didn't have much money．即使她沒有足夠的錢，她給我買任何我需要的學習用品．
①whatever無論什么．引導的賓語從句，作為buy的賓語．
②even though引導的讓步狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．我會存錢給他買新衣服讓她看起來仍然年輕．
that make her look still young是一定語從句，修飾先行詞clothes，關系詞that作為定語從句的主語，不可省略．

解答 Love for my mother
We need love，we also need to love others．The person I love most is my mother．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．（介紹）
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．【高分句型一】She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．（她為我做的事）
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．【高分句型二】I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．（我將會為她做什么）

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．