Question

李明準備在發言時回憶與班級同學一起度過的美好時光，如課堂上認真的學習生活，課后愉快的游戲，運動，輕松快樂的戶外旅行等等。他也準備將自己的高中生活的打算與大家一起分享。

注意：1、字數 80~100左右，文章開頭已給出。

2、文章中不得出現真實學校和姓名。

My dear class, it’s my last time to give such a speech in this class.

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My class, no matter how far I will be away from you , I will miss you all.

 

Answer 1

My dear class, it’s my last time to give such a speech in this class.

Our teachers are experienced in teaching. They are strict with us, but when we have difficulty, they are patient enough. They treat us as their own children. How kind they are!

I like my classmates. We learn from and help each other. We share our happiness and sadness with each other, too!

I have spent three years in our school. I have a great time and I am good at my studies.

Sadly, I will leave here soon. But I will never forget my school, my teachers, and my friends. My teachers taught me knowledge; my classmates gave me friendship, my school left me a good memory. Shouldn’t I say thanks to my school, my teachers and my classmates?I will study hard in the future.I will miss our school,our teachers and classmates.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓小作者介紹和同學度過的美好時光。小作者把要求寫的幾點都表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時，小作者還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: They treat us as their own children.他們把我們看做他們的孩子等,學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：話題類作文。