Question

11．中學階段你一定讀過一些故事書吧，請根據以下問題提示寫一篇短文，談談你最喜歡的
故事．提示：
1．What is the name of the story and who is the writer？
2．What is the main idea of the story and who are the main characters？
3．Why do you like it？
要求：
1．表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規范；
2．文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
3．詞數80左右．
I like reading very much．My favourite book is Jane Eyre．It was written by Charlotte Bronte．She was born in Britain．She was a famous writer in the world．She wrote many books and Jane Eyre was one of the best．In this book，she wrote about a woman named Jane Eyre．Jane Eyre wasn't pretty，but she had a strong idea of self-respect．She never gave up whenever she met any difficulties in her life．I was deeply moved by her story．I like this book very much．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
She wrote many books and Jane Eyre was one of the best．她寫了很多書，《簡愛》是最好的之一．
one of the best最好中的一個
句型二：
She never gave up whenever she met any difficulties in her life．每當她遇到了她生命中任何困難她從不放棄．
whenever 引導的時間狀語從句gave up 放棄

解答 I like reading very much．My favourite book is Jane Eyre．It was written by Charlotte Bronte．She was born in Britain．She was a famous writer in the world．She wrote many books and Jane Eyre was one of the best．【高分句型一】In this book，she wrote about a woman named Jane Eyre．（主要人物）Jane Eyre wasn't pretty，but she had a strong idea of self-respect．She never gave up whenever she met any difficulties in her life．【高分句型二】I was deeply moved by her story．（喜歡的原因）I like this book very much．

點評 能夠根據提示進行書面表達，能夠圍繞主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達自己的思想，進而完成寫作任務．