Question

根據中英文提示，寫一篇內容完整、意思連貫、邏輯清晰，不少于60詞的短文。假如你是大明，上周六你和父母去頤和園游玩，請你向同學們介紹一下頤和園和你們的游玩經歷及感受。開頭已給出。

Distance （距離）	twenty kilometers from the centre of the city
Size	covers(覆蓋) 2.9 square kilometers
Famous Tourist Spot(旅游景點)	the Longevity Hill(萬壽山)

提示詞：lovely park， drive， find， decide， climb up to， view， foreigners， I hope . . .

My parents and I spent some time off in the Summer Palace last Saturday.

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Answer 1

My parents and I spent some time off in the Summer Palace last Saturday. It is a lovely park in the west of Beijing. It's only twenty kilometers from the center of the city. It covers 2.9 square kilometers. One of the famous tourist spot is the Longevity Hill. My father drove us to the park that morning andit took us about 2 hours. We found that there were many people in the park. So we decided to climb up to the top of the Longevity Hill. When we got there, we had a clear view of the whole park. There we met a few foreigners. They said that they liked Beijing very much. I was really proud of our city when I heard that. I hope our city will become more and more beautiful and people all over the world will come to visit it every year.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹去頤和園的旅行。要求介紹距離，面積及旅游景點

因為是描述過去的事情，所以主要用過去時態。因為是和父母去旅行，所以主要用第一人稱復數。

【亮點說明】這篇短文時態應用正確，語言流暢，能適當的運用連詞，應用了大量的短語和高級句式，如We found that there were many people in the park. So，There we met a few foreigners.，I was really proud of our city when I heard that，I hope our city will become more and more beautiful等，這使文章更豐富，更有邏輯性。

考點：表格作文。