Question

12．假如你是Gina，根據下面的圖片，以"My bedroom"為題介紹你的臥室．提示詞：chair，bookcase，table，bed，baseball，sofa，books，schoolbag，pencil box，watch，TV，in，on，under
注意：1請不要寫真實姓名和校名．
2 用上所給提示詞并適當發揮．
3字數40詞以上．
My  bedroom
Look，this is my bedroom．There is a chair，a bookcase，a table，and a bed in it．The bed is near the table．There is a bookcase near thebed，too．Many good books are in the bookcase．There is a TV on the table，my baseball is under the bed．The schoolbag and the pencilbox areon the sofa．My bedroom is beautiful．I like it very much．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There is a chair，a bookcase，a table，and a bed in it里面有一把椅子，一個書柜，一張桌子和一張床．這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
The schoolbag and the pencil box are on the sofa書包和鉛筆盒在沙發上．on the sofa在沙發上．

解答 My bedroom
Look，this is my bedroom．【開頭點明主題】There is a chair，a bookcase，a table，and a bed in it【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】．The bed is near the table．There is a bookcase near the bed，too．Many good books are in the  bookcase．There is a TV on the table，my baseball is under the bed．The schoolbag and the pencil box are on the sofa【高分句型二，注意介詞的使用】．My bedroom is  beautiful．I like it very much．【正文部分詳細介紹房間】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．