Question

書面表達。(滿分15分)

2014年1月上旬，全國中東部地區17省市持續霧霾，陷入大范圍的重度和嚴重污染。造成這一現象的主要原因是工廠排出的廢氣和汽車尾氣等。現請你根據以下三個方面的提示

請以“How to protect our environment”為題寫一篇短文，簡單描述當今世界存在的環境問題，并重點說說如何從自身做起，保護好環境。

要求：條理清晰，語法正確，語言流暢，字跡工整，字數80詞左右，文中不得出現真實的姓名和學校。

要點：1.各種污染（如空氣、水、噪音等等）；

2.樹木的濫砍亂伐；

3.作為一名中學生,應該如何從自身做起，保護好環境

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How to protect/save our environment/world?

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse today. Water is polluted, we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals are getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air into the sky. The population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases.

In order to live a better life, something must be done to stop the pollution. It’s our duty to protect our environment. We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. Trees are very helpful and important for us. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.

If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful. In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better. “There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

【解析】

試題分析：小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的內容。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理.

考點:考查提綱類作文。