Question

17．每年5月31日是世界無煙日，請結合下面所給要點，以"Saying No to Smoking"為題，談談吸煙的危害．
要點：1．吸煙有害健康，能導致咳嗽、肺癌等疾��；
2．吸煙不但浪費錢還污染環境；
3．二手煙同樣有害；
4．你的態度：面對別人吸煙怎么辦？
參考詞匯：
lung cancer肺癌；secondhand smoke二手煙； cause引起；waste浪費；harm有害；pollute污染
Saying No to Smoking
Smoking is a big problem．Even though cigarettes harm our bodies and waste a lot of money，smokers still enjoy smoking．
Smoking is bad for your health．First of all，if people smoke too much，they will get lung cancer．Second，smokingpollutes the environment．A bad environment can influence our daily lives．So we should say no to smoking．
I hate smoking．But my father is a heavy smoker．He used to smoke five cigarettes a day，and he even made himself sick．Now，with the help of my mother，he has given up smoking．Fortunately，he is now healthierthan before．
All in all，I want to tell every smoker，we should say no to smoking．If we do，the world will bemore beautiful!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是以"Saying No to Smoking"為題，談談吸煙的危害．時態主要為一般現在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．吸煙有害健康，能導致咳嗽、肺癌等疾�。�
2．吸煙不但浪費錢還污染環境；
3．二手煙同樣有害；
4．你的態度：面對別人吸煙怎么辦？
常用到的重點短語：
even though 即使
be bad for 對…不利
do harm to 對…有害
keep away from 遠離
try to do sth 盡力做某事

【高分句型】
1．①Even though cigarettes harm our bodies and waste a lot of money，smokers still ②enjoy smoking．
①even though 即使，引導讓步狀語從句．
②enjoy doing sth 喜歡做某事
2．If someone offers a cigarette，we should refuse it．
if引導的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態動詞should，從句用一般現在時代替一般將來時．

解答 Smoking is a big problem．Even though cigarettes harm our bodies and waste a lot of money，smokers still enjoy smoking．【高分句型】
    Smoking is bad for your health．First of all，if people smoke too much，they will get lung cancer．（吸煙有害健康，能導致咳嗽、肺癌等疾�。㏒econd，smoking pollutes the environment．A bad environment can influence our daily lives．So we should say no to smoking．（吸煙不但浪費錢還污染環境）
    Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well．（二手煙同樣有害）So we must do something to keep away from smoking．If someone offers a cigarette，we should refuse it．【高分句型】And if anyone smokes nearby，we should try to stop it．From now on，every of us should follow the law and say no to smoking．（面對別人吸煙怎么辦）
  All in all，I want to tell every smoker，we should say no to smoking．If we do，the world will be more beautiful!

點評 提綱作文是一項能夠充分考查學生語言綜合運用能力的題型．主要考查學生運用已學的語言基礎知識和已掌握的英語寫作技能準確表達客觀事實，闡述個人觀點，進行思想交流的書面表達能力．為了提高書面表達水平，平時應加強閱讀，應背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎知識，掌握常用文體的寫作方法．其實，用英文寫信，記日記等都是學生力所能及且行之有效的練習寫作的好方法．