Question

1．當今社會，浪費和奢侈消費變得越來越嚴重，為創建文明城，泰州市啟動了"節儉生活，從我做起"行動．請你寫一篇以"Saving"為題的80字左右的短文．
內容包括：
1、幾種浪費現象：在校浪費食物；離開教室時不關燈；洗手后不關水龍頭．
2、生活中你做過的有關節儉的事：購物時用布袋替代塑料袋；步行或騎行去上學…
3、你對節儉的看法（至少發揮兩點）．
Saving
Taizhou government has called on the citizens to do something for saving so that we can enjoy our happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．                                   

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Some students often forget to turn off the lights when they leave the classroom．
句中"when they leave the classroom"為"when"引導的時間狀語從句，句中短語有"forget to do sth 忘記去做某事"．這句話意為：有的學生經常在離開教室的時候忘記關燈．
高分句型二：
I hope there will be more and more Taizhou citizens to keep saving from every little thing．
句中"there will be more and more Taizhou citizens to keep saving from every little thing"為賓語從句，從句中涉及的短語有："比較級+and+比較級"意為"越來越…"；"keep doing sth"意為"一直做某事"．這句話意為：我希望越來越多的泰州市民從小事做起，一直節約．

解答 Saving
    Taizhou government has called on the citizens to do something for saving so that we can enjoy our happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．（點明主旨）
    In our daily life，we can see different kinds of wasting．For example，some students waste food in school．Some students often forget to turn off the lights when they leave the classroom．【高分句型一】Others even don't turn off the tap after washing their hands．（浪費的現象）
    As for me，I am trying my best to keep saving．When I go shopping，I use cloth bags instead of plastic bags．And I go to school on foot or ride bikes instead of taking my parents'car．Besides，I save water and food in my everyday life，and try to recycle the energy．（我做的節儉的事）
    In a word，saving is very necessary and important．We should keep saving as possible as we can．I hope there will be more and more Taizhou citizens to keep saving from every little thing．【高分句型二】（我對節儉的看法）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．