Question

20．假設你是李華，你的外國筆友Tony來信詢問你的周末的情況，請根據以下提示內容給他回信．
1．周末不上課，但必須完成家庭作業；
2．幫父母做一些家務、看看電視、上上網等；
3．上周末和朋友們去郊外玩：做游戲，野餐，拍了很多照片；
注意：字數80左右，信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear Tony，
I'm very glad to get your letter．You asked me about my life on weekends．Now let me tell you something about it．
I don't have any classes on weekends，but I usually spend some time doing my homework at home．After that，I often help my parents do some housework for one or two hours．Sometimes I watch TV，or go online to read some news or do some reading in order to open up my eyes．
Last weekend，I went to a countryside with some of my friends．We played some games，and we had a picnic，at same time，we took a lot of pictures and had a good time．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是給筆友回信說說周末的情況．注意信件格式，時態主要為一般現在時和一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．周末不上課，但必須完成家庭作業；
2．幫父母做一些家務、看看電視、上上網等；
3．上周末和朋友們去郊外玩：做游戲，野餐，拍了很多照片；
常用到的重點短語：
spend+時間+doing sth 花時間做某事
help sb do sth幫助某人做某事
in order to 為了…
open up 開闊
take pictures照相
at the same time同時

【高分句型】
1．Sometimes I watch TV，or go online ①to read some news or ②do some reading ③in order to ④open up my eyes．
①動詞不定式做目的狀語．
②do+some+doing（動名詞），表示一種動作．
③in order to 為了…，做目的狀語．
④open up 開闊．
2．We①played some games，and we had a picnic，②at the same time，we took a lot of pictures and had a good time．
①本句是一系列的動作，play games玩游戲，have a picnic野餐，take pictures照相，have a good time玩得開心．
②at the same time同時．

解答 Dear Tony，
I'm very glad to get your letter．You asked me about my life on weekends．Now let me tell you something about it．
I don't have any classes on weekends，but I have to spend some time doing my homework at home．（周末不上課，但必須完成家庭作業）After that，I often help my parents do some housework for one or two hours．Sometimes I watch TV，or go online to read some news or do some reading in order to open up my eyes．【高分句型】（幫父母做一些家務、看看電視、上上網等）
Last weekend，I went to a countryside with some of my friends．We played some games，and we had a picnic，at the same time，we took a lot of pictures and had a good time．【高分句型】（上周末和朋友們去郊外玩：做游戲，野餐，拍了很多照片；）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應在內心構思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當的詞語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內容．盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．