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背景設定：為了保護環境，節約能源，中國政府出臺一條禁令：從2008年6月1日起，禁止在超市和商店中使用塑料袋。為此學校組織了一次討論會，請同學們暢所欲言，發表自己的看法。下面是汪進峰同學的發言內容：

姓名	發言中心內容
Wang Jinfeng	1,禁令內容：禁止使用塑料袋;阻止超市、商店向顧客提供免費塑料袋；如果提供需要付費。 2，個人認識：對我們有益；能幫助保護環境。原因：a）引起白色污染。b）污染環境和水。c)生產塑料袋浪費能源。目的：貫徹執行禁令，改善環境   3，今后的做法：鼓勵家人、朋友購物時自帶布袋、籃子；不亂扔垃圾，對塑料瓶、易拉罐等進行回收……

請根據Wang Jinfeng 同學的發言內容，以他的名義寫一篇發言稿。（15分）

要求： 1.圍繞汪的觀點和意愿進行表達，內容要適當拓展；

2.內容必須包含上表3個要點；

3.詞數80—100，開頭已給（不記入詞數）。

提示詞匯：ban (禁令),provide, free (免費), protect, cause, pollute, soil(土壤), energy, improve, recycle soft, drink, can(易拉罐)

Dear everyone!

China has put a ban on the use of much plastic bags starting on June 1, 2008.

                                                                              

                                                                                              

                                                                             

                                                                                       

    

That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Hello，everyone!

China has put a ban on the use of much thinner plastic bags starting on June 1，2008．The ban can stop the supermarkets and shops from providing free plastic bags．People should pay for every plastic bag if they need it．

I think this ban is very helpful to us．It helps to protect our environment．In my opinion，plastic bags can cause “white” pollution and they can also pollute the soil and water．They are harmful to our health．What's more，producing plastic bags can waste a lot of energy，too．So we should carry out this ban in order to improve our environment．

What should we do? I think We should encourage our family members to carry cloth bags or baskets when they go shopping．In the school，we mustn't throw the rubbish everywhere．We should reduce the waste，reuse some bags and recycle plastic bottles，soft drink cans，waste paper and so on．If every one of us does like this，our environment will be better and better．

That's all for my speech．Thanks for listening!

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。所給材料中已經明確了文章體裁為演講，并給出了演講的相關內容。在寫作時，可以根據所給的材料組織好結構和語言�？梢允褂玫谝蝗朔Q，注意句子的完整性和主謂一致。句與句之間可使用合適的連詞，使文章更緊湊和流暢。

【亮點分析】

這篇文章結構清晰明了，表達通順流暢，并大量的使用了短語和句式，如：stop…from doing sth.停止做某事；In my opinion 在我看來；Be harmful to對……有害；carry out執行；in order to為了；encourage sb. to do sth.鼓勵某人做某事；better and better越來越好，等等；另外文中用了很多連詞,如what’s more, so, if, and 等等。

考點：提綱作文