Question

20．公共秩序，你我有責．假如你是陽光中學的張濤，請根據表格內容，描述不文明行為，并倡議同學們在校內外進守公共秩序（obey public rules），-共創良好公共環境．

不良行為	●spit（吐痰） here and there ●play with public facilities（設備）
文明行為	校內	●圖書館：保持安靜；及時歸還圖書． ●食堂（canteen）：排隊等候；不浪費食物． ●教室：不再課桌上涂畫；不追逐打鬧．
	校外	●馬路上：… ●公園里：…

要求：
1．所寫內容必須包括表格中的信息，可適發揮．
2．自擬至少兩點對校外文明行為的倡議，不重復所給信息．
3．文章不少于90詞，開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總同數-
4．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整．
5．文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名及地名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think each of us should develop good behaviour我認為我們每個人應該養成好的行為習慣．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．

【高分句型二】
the more efforts we make，the better public places we will have我們做的努力越多，我們就會有更好的公共場所．
the+比較級，the+比較級：越…就越…

解答 My dear friends．
Each of us has the duty to obey public rules．Let's say no to the bad behaviour．Now．we can still see some people spit here and there．Sometimes，naughty children play with public facilities．Besides，a few people say bad words at cach other．（不良行為）
I think each of us should develop good behaviour．【高分句型一】In the school library，we should keep quiet．We should also return the books in time．In the canteen，we should wait in line．We'd better not waste any food．In the classroom，we mustn't write or draw on our desks．You know，it's dangerous to run after cach other or fight with others．
We need to obey public rules outside the school as well．When we cross a road，please wait for the green light．While we are enjoying ourselves in the park，remember not to pick flowers or leave our waste things there．（文明行為）
Finally，I'd like to say，the more efforts we make，the better public places we will have．【高分句型二】
Zhang Tao

點評 提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．